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The Past
By _Andrew_
A moment of my life
When smiles were real
And you became my first
And my last
In just one night
My tears might find justification
But not for you
Pending all that i am
For one heart beat
I’ll remember this moment
Always
Time will fade
My heart will go on
Never to stop for you again
Your face once spelt love
In a language I only knew
All I see is crimson
You must feel big
To criticize all that I am
All that I’ve done
All that I’ve said
In just one night
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Copyright 2004 James Shearer
Published on Monday, February 23, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Past"
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On Sunday, March 5, 2006, monalisamarie
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wrote:
Oooh..wow...I can relate...
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A former member wrote:
This one will linger in my mind for a while...because of its purity.
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A former member wrote:
This definately reminds me of a couple of incidents...it took away my trust and only made me lust for others...I am just now beginning to get over all of this after 4 years...it was good~~~chance
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On Sunday, May 2, 2004, Jane
(53) wrote:
Wow... this was so painful to read. It's was bleeding with emotion and beautifully written!
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, Mute Serenade
(445) wrote:
This one knocked me back a bit, simply because it's simple but conveys something intense so beautifully... it sounds like you mean it so much, it's not random words, it's really there. the way you break lines "this moment, Always"... wonderful... sue
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On Thursday, February 26, 2004, nell
(271) wrote:
beaitfull write full of emotion, i liked the last stanze alot, it adds a wondefull impact which makes u think
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A former member wrote:
This poem embodies such raw emotion. I love it... "My face once spelt love in a language I only knew.." I love that line.
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On Tuesday, February 24, 2004, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
"Time will fade / My heart will go on / Never to stop for you again" ...i all too well can relate. excellent write
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