Flashback

By Liath

Midnight
The clock's struck 12
The moon is up
It's time to go
Into the darkness
Away from reality
Give me some of that acid
So I can trip like you do
I want to bite
Want to drink
Want to feel the
Flesh break
Between my teeth
I'm flying
You're falling
I'm dying
You're crying
LaLaLaLaLaLa
Spinning
I see Jesus
Under the desk
Get em' away
Gummy Bears
Chasing me
Touching you
moaning
softly
You're crying
I'm alive
But I'm falling

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Copyright 2004 Liath
Published on Tuesday, February 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Nice. I liked it.

  • A former member wrote: Wow...That was great and trippy dude hahaha

  • The Fallen Angel On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, The Fallen Angel (235)By person wrote:

    *laughing*i feel like I'm high off ecstasty after reading this+Fallen One+

  • Liath On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Liath (35)By person wrote:

    Lol. That was the effect I had wanted, as well as a bit of a flashback through all of my posted works thus far on dp.

  • Liath On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Liath (35)By person wrote:

    But what it was actually supposed to be is an lsd flashback, incase you didn't know. =)

  • Anth On Thursday, April 22, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    great work, a rollercoaster ride of poetic mastery and images, swirling movement in a way to this, you capture the feeling so well my fave line was lalalalalal....lol

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