Captured

By Jaded Jezzabelle

Held hostage
by a lifestyle
Thats become a vile
reminder
of
all the dreams I set aside
from
fear of failure
Frustration
is where I reside
on
the corner of
contempt
and
resentment
When did I become
so
bitter
The sour taste of my soul
tainting
my worthless existence
I'm Jaded
my
life has been raided
by
the morality
thats been hidden
away inside
With
several fatalities
reported
Goals
aborted
tossed aside
like
the unwanted embryo
of one
who has come
to
save us from ourselves
Hells
basement
is
cold and damp
below
the fire that burns
so
intense
Barren
within intense
emptiness
The
echo
of
my own voice
makes
one final attempt
to
convince
me
that
I'm not
alone
.
.
.
But
.
I've been known
.
to
.
lie
.
to
.
myself
.
.
.

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Copyright 2004 Jadedwings
Published on Sunday, February 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Lipstick Factor On Tuesday, March 17, 2009, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    Nicely done--awesome flow--this almost reads itself. Nice ending--lots of impact. Well done. And thank you for all the feedback on my writing--much appreciated. Gratitude.

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, April 14, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    I always enjoy your poetry, its always got a certain attitude of reality and emotion all at the same time. ~*~Tart~*~

  • WikidGrrl On Thursday, June 3, 2004, WikidGrrl (26)By person wrote:

    very emotional...i know what you mean...everyone lies to themselves though...some wont admit it, but we all do it...:) *die~ana*

  • Mistress Morbid On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Wow, lots of emotion. This was very powerful. Good job =) Morb

  • capt_funguy On Monday, March 15, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    sweet ... pulled right through this by the form of it ... like a fall ..... tapping the emotions beautifully .... very cool ... funguy

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Saturday, February 14, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    fascinating scheme you have here...i like it alot..i have to agree with purr, a very effective approach, indeed...-l-

  • purr_verse On Monday, February 9, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    the format at the end brought an extra shot of disturbing power to this piece, already shot through with frustration, pain and doubt... very emotive and well written...extremely effective. purr

  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, February 8, 2004, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Some how I sense pain in your words... Perhaps you're pained... love the write, awesome... inspiring... beautiful. ~*~tart~*~

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