Watching

By SilentStalker

Do you know that I'm watching you?
Can you feel my eyes?
Gazing at your silken hair;
The softness of your thighs?

Adoring both your feet and hips;
Your breasts I want to taste?
Or peering 'round your shoulders just
To see your pretty face?

Or staring in amazement at
Places I've never been?
Envisioning mere fantasies
Of things I've never seen?

While watching every move you make
And growing twice in size...
Do you know that I'm watching you?
Can you feel my eyes?

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Copyright 2004 Darun Ferguson
Published on Saturday, February 7, 2004.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • Commander_Cadaver On Friday, August 30, 2013, Commander_Cadaver (245)By person wrote:

    Now I see why you go by SilentStalker. I liked it. Like a small window into the mind of a stalker.

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Thursday, November 15, 2012, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    Oh to know what lays in wait behind this... fuel for my thoughts..... Scholar

  • Devilish On Saturday, January 28, 2012, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Hell yeah!!! Why is it everytime i read you i get hypmotized.... Scholar

  • Mari On Sunday, December 23, 2007, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    Doesn't every guy fantasize about a hot girl once and a while/

  • A former member wrote: Short, hard, intense and to the point. Good writing should be like good sex and this certainly was. The subject matter was erotic (to me, anyway) and it was delivered wham, bam, thank you ma'am. Loved it, loved it, loved it.

  • A former member wrote: i like this poem.it shows that you care about the people u love.

  • A former member wrote: I really liked this poem!

  • yslehc On Friday, April 16, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    scary, love it though :P

  • A former member wrote: oooh...creepy, i like this one alot ~serpentine~

  • A former member wrote: I love to watch. That's what makes this poem so interesting. It's the tip of the iceberg of my people watching fascination.

  • Moodswing On Sunday, February 22, 2004, Moodswing (63)By person wrote:

    i never thought id see the day you posted something with even a slight erotic appeal to it...but i must applaud this peice...not often one can make feeling dirty sound so much fun...lol

  • Solace On Sunday, February 8, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Very stalkerish and serial killerish i dont know if thats what you intended but thats what i got. Stalker hunting prey...

  • SilentStalker On Sunday, February 8, 2004, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ...that's about the gist of it...maybe not the serial killer part, though... Scholar

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