Log In
Push me under
By Cwn Annwn
Shove me under...
Push me deeper in this ice-cold lake
Watch me strive for a breath before my lungs fill with water
Can you see my eyes...?...Or are your hands around my neck in the way?
I'm crying...but it wouldn't matter to you...
Could you realize...I fucked up my hopes in a single day
I lost all reason
In less then a passing season
I damned myself to this...
I shall never forgive my self for the mistake that befell upon you
~GoNe~
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2004 Noctem Aeternus
Published on Wednesday, February 4, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Push me under"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, bpathos
(78)
wrote:
I liked the imagery.
-
A former member wrote:
............... (SPEECHLESS) :::::FALLS ON FLOOR::::::
-
A former member wrote:
I've felt this way so many times in my life... again you express feelings very very well... Another great write :)
-
On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
intense....I like how the coversation going on in your head is so realistic...good one
Cwn Annwn's Latest Works Feed
Join