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killing me softy
By Sky Singer
i love you
with all
of my heart
but it's
breaking.
i'm sitting here
shaking;
tortured and
tormented,
i'm kept here
just waiting
for that
doleful moment
when my
world
falls apart
and i'm left
with the
remnants
of this,
my shattered
heart.
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Copyright 2004 eve
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On Saturday, February 28, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321)
wrote:
I like this, and as I said before take those chances if you don't you will never know (or be able to learn from them).
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On Saturday, February 28, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
I like the shortness, i dont know why but it just fits, well done.~~~Grave
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
aw great poem, i like how it sounds with the short lines...
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, LovedByAMiracle
(51) wrote:
usually these poems of heartache all sound the same and pretty much suck. but this was so different. it was wonderful. im definitely going to check out more of your work
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, sweetambrosia
(80) wrote:
I'm not exactly sure why, but this really hit me, it's just beautiful! --sweets
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