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A Dream Come True
By Rebel_Angel
This isn't my best work so go easy on me...
Waking up next to you,
My head resting on your chest.
You look me in the eyes,
And tell me I'm your one and only.
That we will always be together,
And nothing will change.
I close my eyes taking it all in,
The fact that we are finally together.
It isn't another dream,
It is reality...
That would be my dream come true.
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Copyright 2004 Rebel_Angel
Published on Thursday, January 29, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Dream Come True"
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On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555)
wrote:
Love the ending... kinda like it is, but its not... kinda... idk... its cool though. hehehe ~*~Tart~*~
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On Sunday, September 5, 2004, ONEANDLONELY
(117) wrote:
very peaceful...makes me feel good...
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On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue
(42) wrote:
amazing...breathtaking...like im absolutely breathless...hit me right in the chest...
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On Saturday, April 3, 2004, a restless wanderer
(14) wrote:
the night before might feel good for a while, but the next morning always lasts forever, good luck, dreams do come true
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
The feeling you're experiencing in this is very sought after. Express it every chance you get! It's beautiful.
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
paints a great picture
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, Blacken_Heart
(20) wrote:
awww...thats a good one too, I like it.
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
Thank you all for wonderful comments, I was kinda worried about this one and Secrets. I'm glad so many liked it. It really makes be happy!
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On Friday, January 30, 2004, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
Ahh, my favorite saying: "if only." Great write indeed.
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, hopeless
(51) wrote:
im honestly speachless because this is exactly what ive dreamed.. and you put it into words... this is nice... and im glad ur back with writing hun... ~hopeless
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
nice indeed i like it it speaks of hope that so many lose i'm glad that u havent yet
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, The_Scavenger
(30) wrote:
Great write. Those words describe my own dream come true but mostlikly with a different person in mind.;)
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