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Imprinted
By flying_fox
lock the door
and slide the chain
keep me safe
inside insane
from cliched words
and see-through lies
from thrusting hips
and burning thighs
ask me not
to come and play
leave my sanctum
time delay
your lave flows
with blistered gust
eternal flow
and firebrand lust
dark mark you've left
imprinted claim
a savage tag
yours i'll remain
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Copyright 2004 flying_fox
Published on Friday, January 23, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555)
wrote:
very awesome
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On Thursday, May 6, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
I absolutely loved the second stanza, but the whole poem is overall amazing! Such a strong, intense rhythm. Awesome work I love this one. -L
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On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
WOW!!!that was brilliant.i especially liked the rhythm of this one.**** just as you deserve.knight
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On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
I loved the last part. Great read, great read indeed. =) Morb
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On Saturday, March 27, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Nice rhythm to this piece - I'd like to volunteer to lock you in sometime... : )
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
I enjoyed the entire piece. I can't pick out a favorite part. Nice arrangement of words.
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On Thursday, March 4, 2004, ariadne
(7) wrote:
"inside insane" oooooohh...i always wonder which one is the healthy one insane or in sane...BEWDIFUL
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
dammit, i thought i left a comment on this already! (brain falls out) "inside insane" - you know it rules...hehheh...i also love "firebrand lust". :) purr
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On Sunday, February 8, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
I love the rhythm of this....everything just fell together perfectly.."dark mark you've left imprinted claim a savage tag yours i'll remain"....so good to read great poetry!
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Just… wow! “keep me safe inside insane” just blew me away. Powerfully written, with a savage and sensual edge. Very well done!
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A former member wrote:
'inside insane' splendid.perfect. This composedpoem breathes w/ the ethereal 'eternal flow' of spirited rhythm...well done.
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On Friday, January 23, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
last stanza is what it's all about - rules to live by - uh... uh ... if you're into that sort of thing i mean - funguy
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