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Decisions
By Drayvinio
Reality hidden
Submerged in paranoia
Flaws emerge
Kills the mind
Cripples the body
Everything stripped away
Shattered and broken I lay
Hope is lost
Failure on the horizon
What's left?
Me. Only me.
Shall I give in?
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Copyright 2004 Drayvinio
Published on Monday, January 19, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Decisions"
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On Monday, February 11, 2008, lajeeves
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wrote:
NO
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On Saturday, March 5, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
*keep your head above water*do not give in to 'the going under'...i love this.
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On Friday, January 28, 2005, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
what's left? me-only me. well said, this was short yes.. but with such a deep impact and message. very much enjoyed
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I like short poems, this one was good!
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Nicely done. A great write. and welcome.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, Drayvinio
(19) wrote:
thank you for the feedback and the welcome. I have yet to write a long poem.
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