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Disenchanted
By flying_fox
I kill you
I relish your pain
I hear your screams
bliss
Your blood escapes you
yet my hands are not stained
I taste it
listen...
I cannot bury you
I'd rather see you rot
stench
The same as when you were here
your earthy maggot words
addicting me, infecting me
silence
I'm clean now
my brainwashed sight demystified
free
Free.
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Copyright 2004 flying_fox
Published on Sunday, January 18, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, October 21, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175)
wrote:
a mantra of inner strenth......well done......urban
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On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
I have no words that could ever justify this poem. I am left speechless... -Morb
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On Thursday, February 26, 2004, nightshade
(120) wrote:
damn it never free always a little piece that lingers as here but that doesn't matter when you're a piece of shit like
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On Thursday, February 26, 2004, nightshade
(120) wrote:
this fellow must be you deserve to let others know just how bad he was and how much it hurt
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A former member wrote:
'your earthy maggot words
addicting me, infecting me
silence
I'm clean now' the blood escapes me, but i taste it, almost as pain, aslmost less; but i taste it, the sting of Tennyson... a Rocky Horror bite; a little black, little white/this poetic s
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A former member wrote:
...this poetic scream is bliss. bakkstreet boy! (ouch!); 'my brainwashed sight demystified.' free-zing... backup downed. lovely little write...
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On Thursday, January 22, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
LOL - you know I'm kidding re the Bakkstreet Boy! (Though I'm sure yu're a wonderful chorus-line dancer...)
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A former member wrote:
Mmm...I sense anger...angry at the addiction to the beautiful and innocuous words of a liar/cheater. Maybe I'm completely off...
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
You are, of course, spot on. Liar, cheater and odious little tick in general. :) FF
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
if that's "disenchanted " , i'm afraid to read - " really pissed off " - more - more - more ... funguy
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
"free Free." Very cool. Powerful to the max. Great write.
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