today (i need you)
By Sky Singer
it’s one of
those days
i wish i had
a field
to run through.
race the wind
and not have
a care in
all the world
it’s one of
those days
i wish i had
that proverbial
hole
to crawl into
curl up
and cry
to my heart’s
content
it’s one of
those days
i wish i could
break free
from fabricated
chains
and invisible walls
it’s one of
those days
...i need you...
more than ever
here beside me,
holding me
close,
keeping me
sane
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Copyright 2004 eve
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On Monday, February 23, 2004, Drea
(1443) wrote:
...and somehow you have wrote the words that have been running through my mind for days. I know this feeling TOO well. This almost made me cry. ~Drea~
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On Sunday, February 22, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
I too am 'having one of those days' Eve... great work, lovely structure. FF
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A former member wrote:
Love, you only need to look at my picture when i'm not there and you can always know i'm wanting you in my arms and thinkin about you
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On Monday, February 23, 2004, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
if only it were that easy... love you, baby
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On Wednesday, January 14, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
I too can relate to this in a BIG way...it sucks to know what or who u need but it orthey are not atainable for one reason or another...good one
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A former member wrote:
i know exactly where you're coming from. and you put it in a way that i can feel it too.
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A former member wrote:
Well...that hit me...I completely understand. Way way too well. Nicely written.
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On Tuesday, January 13, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
You have no idea....I feel this way...RIGHT now.....thanks..
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On Wednesday, January 14, 2004, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
amazing, isn't it? :) thanks for the comment
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A former member wrote:
I think everyone has felt this way at one point or another. Good write!