My Rage, My Fear, My Faith, And My Hopes

By morbiddemonchild

The Silence in me screams;
Awakening the well slept.

The pain kept in my mind
Opens the door to the new light.

Tears of blood that brush my cheek,
Fall to the already drowned floor.

Hands of cuts clench in fists'
I will let it all out.

But far too long I've targeted myself
Now I target someone eles;You.

You shall be the target of it all,
My rage, my fear, my faith, and my hopes.

NOTE: this is dedicated to Darun. He always told me I targeted myself too much. here ya go Darun. :)

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Copyright 2004 morbiddemonchild
Published on Saturday, January 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Drea On Saturday, January 3, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    Morbie, this is dark and i agree with Duran on the vengeful part. I enjoyed this. wow, you changed his perspective. very nicely done. ~Drea~

  • SilentStalker On Saturday, January 3, 2004, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...kinda dark and vengeful...so is this a thanks, or a threat...? :) Scholar

  • morbiddemonchild On Saturday, January 3, 2004, morbiddemonchild (33)By person wrote:

    take it to be whichever, but mostly it's a thanks.

  • SilentStalker On Saturday, January 3, 2004, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...hehe...glad you're redirecting all that...I'll gladly take it if it means you'll feel better...ha, maybe it'll help me write some more... Scholar

  • morbiddemonchild On Saturday, January 3, 2004, morbiddemonchild (33)By person wrote:

    la la la-I'm a good inspiration...I guess...

  • SilentStalker On Saturday, January 3, 2004, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...you changed my whole perspective here...compassion was not supposed to be part of my profile... Scholar

  • Nomad On Saturday, January 3, 2004, Nomad (38)By person wrote:

    what a new year's resolution.

  • morbiddemonchild On Saturday, January 3, 2004, morbiddemonchild (33)By person wrote:

    tell me about it...

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