Untitled (You Choose)

By Chalin

on my knees
swallowing my
denial,my mouth
wide open

i am leaning
against an open
window

and i am down.
sleep will not
come for long

you are up
and how far
have you gone.

i can't feel.
i feel unworthy,
and so worth it

that i try to
let it subside,
but everything you
need is making
things worse,

so soon i
will be alone.
i pretend.
break up

my thoughts
and can i
reach you.

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Copyright 2003 Chalin
Published on Tuesday, December 23, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Monday, February 12, 2018, Just Dave (458)By person wrote:

    Great poem. Enjoyable read. JD

  • Jadednoir On Wednesday, December 24, 2003, Jadednoir (28)By person wrote:

    Whoa,you just described what I FEEL! I say: Through (my) teeth ~Jaded~

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