midsummer night

By Sky Singer

embracing
a summer's rain
with only
the stars
to keep me
company

(and every thought is of you)

wandering
empty streets;
the only sound
my footsteps in
shallow puddles
and the
silence
of the ripples

(and every thought is of you)

basking
in the placid
light of the
full moon;
no longer
hiding in the
dark shadows
of the night

(and every thought is of you)

knowing
in my heart
that we share
the same view…
and you're thinking
of me, too








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Copyright 2003 eve
Published on Monday, December 22, 2003.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • WinterGrave On Saturday, February 28, 2004, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    theres somthing about you work i really like, im not sure what but i like it.your a wonderfulp poet my friend.~~~Grave

  • A former member wrote: Such a poem is just another reason i have such high expectations for my self

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, January 3, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    very nice, and I'm so happy for u.

  • A former member wrote: this made me so calm. i love it. i always lay in bed at night and think about my special someone and how they're probably thinking of me too...xx.. _-=Evil=-_

  • manicheism On Sunday, December 28, 2003, manicheism (43)By person wrote:

    i could practically hear (and every thought is of you) whispered every time i read it. the entire poem was a soft smile.

  • Exodus On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    Its soo beautiful, worded so delicately and it holds a lovely meaning...Just amazing...The words of a heart longing to hold, and to be held...This is Excruciatingly Beautiful...

  • Ophelia On Monday, December 22, 2003, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    very nice, I agree with Bakkhus.........O.

  • A former member wrote: 'empty streets; the only sound my footsteps in shallow puddles' THis poem is beautifully enchanting as a midsummer night's dream...


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