Sinful Pleasure

By Moodswing

(A challenge issued to the one who wished to challenge me..*wicked grin*)




I've found salvation...
...bound in your chains

Blessed redemption this lust

You've built this foundation...
...christened in pain

Indulging the senses a must

Don't think that you can walk away
You've set this fire ablaze
It was your kiss that burned my lips
This hunger you will satiate
Release the beast your dread holds still
Chastise my bold temptation
Consume each panted breath I take
Let me be your salvation

Your vision blurs...
...you've tasted bliss

Intoxication is this dance

Each word now slurs...
...a primal hiss

Care to take a chance?

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Copyright 2003 Moodswing
Published on Friday, December 19, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Shortnlethal On Monday, March 23, 2009, Shortnlethal (65)By person wrote:

    "You've built this foundation... ...christened in pain" this part really stuck out for me hit home a lil bit but i love that about some poems ^^ enjoyed reading this!

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Monday, January 9, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    let's dance, wow way better then my writes

  • A former member wrote: awesome write! _-=Evil=-_

  • DarkCheffie On Wednesday, December 24, 2003, DarkCheffie (9)By person wrote:

    all I have to say is WOW! very good poem indeed, From your day adopted nephew! :)(you like my new name?)

  • A former member wrote: outstanding work

  • Methos On Friday, December 19, 2003, Methos (121)By person wrote:

    "Each word now slurs.. a primal hiss "....ohhh, i like that line. Good job. -Methos

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