Lonly person

By hopeless

My world is perfect

My world is great

Why does everything around me tend to break?

Glass from the window.... laying outside on the cold ground

........Broken shards.........

Endless cuts............

Another lonley person died this night...

All will weep but still no one would care

Through the hatred of it all

and for what it added up ....... this child seemed so small

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Copyright 2003 hopeless
Published on Sunday, December 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: You can have everything yet nothing at all...

  • Angel With The Scabbed Wings On Thursday, August 5, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (40)By person wrote:

    wow this inspires me to write a poem that has been in the back of my head for a very long time. great write

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, January 3, 2004, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    your empathy is well and gifted here........urban

  • Rebel_Angel On Friday, December 26, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I feel your pain, but once you are down the only way to go is up! Keep your faith in life.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, December 14, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Damn... you have a way of writing..

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