Eat Fool Eat!

By Cwn Annwn

Eating is a waste of time.
Lets be pure.
Pure like a empty glass.
That or fill youself with dirty waste.
We could be pure as weightless beam of light.
Weightless...but there.
Together we could fill the room.
Together...Together again.

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Copyright 2003 xFallen Immortalx
Published on Wednesday, December 10, 2003.     Filed under:
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  • A former member wrote: This has got some deep meaning, which can be different for different people! Thank you for putting into words! I What else? I like it!

  • A former member wrote: I know that I've felt this way before, I'm just thankful you could put it into words for me. Beautiful

  • A former member wrote: I like the logic.

  • A former member wrote: See the glass as half-empty...X] I like it!

  • A former member wrote: Wow! I love this... it's so... I don't think there's a word for it... It just captures an abstract way of thinking so well... Great write!

  • DeathSentance On Saturday, January 17, 2004, DeathSentance (18)By person wrote:

    Good good deep deep well done:)

  • Drifter On Thursday, January 15, 2004, Drifter (268)By person wrote:

    ohohohh nasty cheeeeezecake. aaaaaaaah. Cookies with canibal coconuts are twice as tasty! YEA I MADE NO SENSE IN ANOTHER COMMENT

  • -Oz- On Thursday, January 15, 2004, -Oz- (134)By person wrote:

    yeah i guess the whole grinding up bits of stuff we don't even really know what it is and living of it is odd/gross...(soylent green)~YeStErDaY~

  • -Oz- On Sunday, January 18, 2004, -Oz- (134)By person wrote:

    don't eat the soylent green i tell u!..{don't mind me...he he he} ~YeStErDaY~

  • Methos On Friday, January 9, 2004, Methos (121)By person wrote:

    I see a darker hidden meaning within this work..Which is kept deep within.. a truly great write-Methos

  • A former member wrote: wow and i thought i was f*ckin weird this is good stuff

  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, January 5, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    this is pure art.. I would love to see some mad man preach this to the masses on Riccy Lake.. (did I spell that right) *wonders what happend to his mind*

  • A former member wrote: I eat lots and lots of bacon! Pure nastiness, that taste like heaven!

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