D O C U M E N T

By Godot

D O C U M E N T

remington urged me to please make it short
a lucid and fluid, but reserved report
--she hasn't much time for things of this sort

no, she hasn't much care for wording like this
and to think otherwise, one would be remiss,
so keeping it cold and sincere, like the Swiss
I'll try to be brief, and not reminisce...

cold like December
(though linked to September
by bonds that I dare not recall)
cold like December, I do well to remember
in March how we walked down the hall
while the me you were hating walked on, dissipating
but we went and we spoke not at all
and the I that I was started steadily fading
to a shallower self, detached and degrading
without much to hold to save the taste of the tears
which was frail consolation when faced with my fears
(and the length of four days when compared to four years)

remington's orders: say what need be said
then leave it alone and go back to bed
she hasn't the time for what troubles your head
stop playing this game, her knights took your rooks
now examine it closely, it's worse than it looks
your king is in checkmate -- turn back to your books

thus cold and sincere
i speak, as if ice
[trade a trite metaphor
for a clever device]

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Published on Thursday, July 18, 2002.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • OLd SouL On Thursday, June 14, 2018, OLd SouL (732)By person wrote:

    I was checkin up on purr_verse and came across this... Incredibly surprised by the lack of comments. There are gems buried in these lines and your technique is impressive. There are amazing pieces all over this site and I feel like I came across a hidden treasure just now.

  • purr_verse On Sunday, November 13, 2016, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    I still think this is one of the absolute best pieces I've read here. It has so many layers of cleverness, insight, technique - just wonderful. Thank you.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, January 21, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Wherever you are, Dear Sir, I hope you are still writing. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Omg. Good God, this deserves more publicity. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Ah, every line so rhythmic and musical, whimsical..."the me you were hating walked on, dissipating". Ah... Scholar

  • stormtalk On Thursday, April 5, 2007, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    fancy

  • purr_verse On Sunday, October 31, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    rhyme and metre and story perfection. Magnificent.

  • A former member wrote: 'lucid and fluid, but reserved' Cold and sincere your poetry never fades to fail my curiousity of your splendid style...

  • cre On Saturday, March 15, 2003, cre (411)By person wrote:

    I could grow addicted to your writing. Very very good.

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