The Rest Of Me

By liquid_emotion

Everything was perfect wrapped up in our love
My knight in shining armor sent from above

But the world had to crumble and someone had to fall
I tried and I cried and I gave you my all

Life was never better than the night I met you
compassionate mysterious honest and true

But hell broke the barrier and crossed human ground
to steal back the only man fate and grace found

I'll never give another soul half that kind of love
never pray for happiness sent from above

But I had my chance and gave in to destiny
never even thought that you'd take the rest of me

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Tuesday, December 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • SolApathy On Monday, August 7, 2017, SolApathy (514)By person wrote:

    ...In all my years of being on this site I have never found a poem that has hit me as hard as this one...The emotions portrayed in this work of art go so far beyond the words on the page...Emitting emotion in powerful waves of remembrance and despair--With a deep feeling of love lost in the air..

  • A former member wrote: heart wrenching sad, emotional poem .... excellent write up, very touching

  • A former member wrote: I know the feeling....amazing how the most treasured thing int he world is so deadly to the soul...*sigh* i hope you become inspired again someday.

  • sixsixnine On Saturday, May 8, 2004, sixsixnine (486)By person wrote:

    fucking very cool! *669*

  • BoldSolitude On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    Very touching, I totally relate to it.

  • Stranger On Thursday, December 11, 2003, Stranger (273)By person wrote:

    Nice to have you back. I am very happy to see a new one from you. But I am sorry that it had to be such a sad one.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, December 11, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1711)By person wrote:

    Good to see a new one from you, meinen Freundin. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Jonas On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Jonas (768)By person wrote:

    *sigh* sadness, love... love is a bastard face. poo. beautiful write.

  • A former member wrote: I agree with what bast said....it was very heartfelt by me as well....stired burried emotions....great piece

  • KittyStryker On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, KittyStryker (736)By person wrote:

    ::sighs:: i feel this slide, slow and sadly into my veins... tears fall, down, down into the silence of alone... when you know there is no other like the one you had. mm. well written... unfortunately, very heartfelt.

  • cre On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, cre (427)By person wrote:

    Wow . . this is so sad . . it gave me chills . . god, I miss reading you liquid . . excellent write . . so heart-wrenching . .

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Six-Out (1483)By person wrote:

    Yes...exactly what she said.

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