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Desire
By purr_verse
I hunger for your darkgift luminescent
with passion crazed and frenzied for the feast
Bacchanalian euphonic sights of glory
Devour me with worldwords, beauty's beast
Drip nepenthe's kiss again upon me, artist
Arcadia's gates fall open, and I sigh
in rapture so relentless, so resplendent,
Entwine me with your craft and vivify
all my soul desires reflected in your visions
Arabesque dart-dance your words across my heart
For signatory splendour, none can touch you
Magnificent creator: bring me art.
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Copyright 2003 Natalie Mills Lyndon
Published on Saturday, December 6, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Desire"
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A former member wrote:
Wonderfully written..
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On Sunday, December 30, 2007, Niemand
(361)
wrote:
Vivid!-Gin
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A former member wrote:
This is so cool,I wish there was a rating higer than 10!
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On Thursday, November 10, 2005, Err0r
(365) wrote:
Simply breath-taking and now I'm left winded and speechless. :)
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On Thursday, May 19, 2005, Trail of Fiends
(37) wrote:
Vivid and excellent wordplay.
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On Sunday, December 26, 2004, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
There is some excellent word play in this piece. I was quite taken aback by "Devour me with worldwords". It speaks to me on a level with is familiar to me. Keep them coming to keep me entertained.
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, Sin
(1168) wrote:
how wonderfully passionate this is...i must agree with everyone, this is quite intoxicating..and again i am appalled that you have not gotten more comments on such a wonderful piece ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
'luminescent
with passion crazed and frenzied for the feast
Bacchanalian euphonic sights of glory
Devour me with worldwords, beauty's beast' wow! heavy-speed mistedmetal fast beauty ... i need a drink, now.
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A former member wrote:
'in rapture so relentless, so resplendent...
all my soul desires reflected in your visions' Like drinking a glass of pure rich wine, the intoxicants of delicious poetry; the movement of your aliteration works brilliantly ...
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On Saturday, March 20, 2004, sulkylime
(191) wrote:
magnificent!!!! every word is just so full of desire, full of life. splendid piece of work, and the last line is marvelous!! --
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A former member wrote:
last line makes it better than it already was
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On Saturday, December 6, 2003, DarkDruidess
(326) wrote:
Once again your words astound me...
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On Saturday, December 6, 2003, Armand
(57) wrote:
you may very well be the most intellectually stylized poet on DP. weaving emotion through hand-picked words that would be lost in any other context. brava!
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On Saturday, December 6, 2003, manunkind
(64) wrote:
very vivid and very well done. I like your style, its so wild :D
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On Saturday, December 6, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! 'worldwords' i dig most truly... just a torrent of lusty red wine... (pain meds pain meds pain meds... eaten a lot i have) ....... you rule though.
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