I am scorpion
By unusual_blood
I am scorpion
poisoning your every thought
with words
you cannot ignore
I am scorpion
my hatred forming slowly
untill
it is so obious
that it burns through your skull
I am scorpion
feeling your every
shiver
down my spine
sensing the cold
that so suddenly covers every inch
of your body
creating a blanket
of stinging ice
I am scorpion
Looking every bit the
opposite
of what you represent
I am
strong
I am
proud
I am
fearless
to the end
I can smell your weakness
inhale
your fear
i can see the
terror lurking
in your soft shy eyes
A deep darkness shades
the only light you ever
came to know
causing you to stumble
over every step you come upon
I am scorpion
Creeping in and out
of houses filled with
young sweet laughter
and haunted by ancient ghosts
still mourning in pain
I am scorpion
I cast an image
in your every thought
I haunt your
every dream
I am scorpion
I sting your innocent heart
I feel the blood
flowing in your
veins
I am scorpion
Comments on "I am scorpion"
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On Sunday, January 15, 2006, Darkest_Addiction
(44) wrote:
i'll be honest this caught my eye because i am a scorpio but i enjoyed it and it made me think and i like that in a peice such as this
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
wow, wonderful write. ~*~TarT~*~
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A former member wrote:
This is amazing, brilliant description, I love it. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
This is intense. I love the hammer pounding rhythm up until the final sting. I will read more from you.
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
you came off to be very strong In this one....I like that trait. Awesome write...again...lol...Bloth
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On Saturday, December 6, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
You definately captured the negative traits of the scorpian. Your commanding tone gave this piece life beyond words. I'll have to mark this one up as a favorite. Being a scorpian, I found myself able to relate.
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On Saturday, December 6, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
hmmm....a great representation of the mystics behind the scorpian. A guardian animal.