skinless (mutilation)

By KittyStryker

i want to make you bleed
to feed
upon your fear as i blind you
to trace my fingernails
lightly
over your waiting
tingling
flesh
dig in and revel in your widened eyes
your gasp

viricide
i said i would never break you

i lied

i will hurt you

not for your pleasure
for mine
i want to rip you apart
devour your heart
make you scream
and keep tearing a hole
in the soul you claim to have

you offered yourself to me
my canvas

it was foolish of you

i will use every piece of you
in expressionistic angst
you will bear the scars of my fury
granted no forgiveness
as i use
and abuse
your weeping, trembling body

i will cause you pain
again
again
my whip will cross your back
i will laugh as you strain against your bonds
and beat you all the harder
for trying to get away
you deserve this punishment
deserve
to be destroyed

i will strike you down
simply because i love you
and there is nothing
you need more
than to know
what it feels like
to writhe in agony
and know you are alone
to bleed at another's hands
to cry out, not only ignored
but your heart scraped all the harder
for your protests

i will make you helpless
you will not escape my wrath
and know, now
i am heartless
and deaf to your tortured tears

for i have no mercy to offer you

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Copyright 2003 ~Bast~
Published on Friday, December 5, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • purr_verse On Friday, December 5, 2003, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    excellent... glorious winterfury. purr

  • A Velvet Tongue On Friday, December 5, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    I absolutely love it...but then, I am a mean bitch too...:)

  • KittyStryker On Friday, December 5, 2003, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    heh... well, Vel... seems i uncovered that Domme side... i plan on holding this energy and channeling it...

  • A Velvet Tongue On Friday, December 5, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    dom looks so much better on you then submissive...:)

  • KittyStryker On Friday, December 5, 2003, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    yeah... yeah it does. when i move, i move into San Fran as a Top who bottoms... not the other way around. we'll see how that works out.

  • A Velvet Tongue On Friday, December 5, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    it will do great Im sure...it has worked for me for 15 years...You be in charge of what way you shift...*hugs*

  • Anybody_Killette On Friday, December 5, 2003, Anybody_Killette (47)By person wrote:

    I absolutely love this..

  • Lost_Soul On Friday, December 5, 2003, Lost_Soul (34)By person wrote:

    Freaky.....I think someone is feeling a bit violent today. I have a feeling that the first person to piss you off today is going to get more than they bargained for. A most enjoyable read.

  • cre On Friday, December 5, 2003, cre (411)By person wrote:

    Oooh, kitty, this is powerful and harsh. I really like "it was foolish of you" and how that line was sort of quiet and set apart a little (at least in my own mind) i could just hear it being said in some madly quiet white-hot tone. Nice write.

  • unusual_blood On Friday, December 5, 2003, unusual_blood (74)By person wrote:

    Right, so don't change anything .. leave it how it is. it's awseome

  • Raze Drake On Friday, December 5, 2003, Raze Drake (85)By person wrote:

    Neither would I. I can imagine someone wispering this "threat" into my ears, softly, so that not to wake my concious.

  • unusual_blood On Friday, December 5, 2003, unusual_blood (74)By person wrote:

    Woah .. wholly shit. This poem is ... angry. It screams out, it's disturbingly honest. It's fucking good, this is my fav of them all. Wow, fucking wow! I like the whip part, can't wait for ur next poem ..

  • -Oz- On Friday, December 5, 2003, -Oz- (134)By person wrote:

    i wouldn't change a thing....~YeStErDaY~

  • bloody LOVEly On Friday, December 5, 2003, bloody LOVEly (86)By person wrote:

    you want to kill them cuz you love them....if thats the jist of it yeah same here awesome


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