Untitled

By apophenia

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did you find?
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Copyright 2003 a_fetal_remnant
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  • bpathos On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, bpathos (78)By person wrote:

    Un conventional.

  • A former member wrote: wow this was cool for some reason it reminded me of the manson movie that comes with one of those cd's ~~GAP~~

  • sulkylime On Sunday, March 21, 2004, sulkylime (191)By person wrote:

    whoa ..now this was something.. love it so much !!!

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    uhhhh.. I read it all, and it was a blast. love it.. Monkey

  • Jonas On Monday, February 9, 2004, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    i did not read that... but it was fun for me to know that someone wrote it.

  • birdwell On Sunday, December 28, 2003, birdwell (140)By person wrote:

    still the most gifted;)

  • purr_verse On Thursday, December 18, 2003, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    i heard dot matrix printers, incessant buzz and dash/crash/burn... I love the pounding staccato visual nature of this. purr

  • MercyRain On Thursday, December 18, 2003, MercyRain (105)By person wrote:

    i can't help but hear music with this... a kind of industrial trance... leaether strip-ish... this is neat... exactly what it claims to be, yet despite giving itself up, still beautifully effective

  • MercyRain On Thursday, December 18, 2003, MercyRain (105)By person wrote:

    do you find? the additional phrases, the altered lines... the obvious... but i think you refer to something much more ambiguous then a few minor alterations to this piece

  • MercyRain On Thursday, December 18, 2003, MercyRain (105)By person wrote:

    but to something inside the writer, the reader... anyone who delves into this madness

  • nell On Monday, December 8, 2003, nell (271)By person wrote:

    yes i did find=) ahh sheer insanity dear!

  • A former member wrote: sweet jesus.

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