Eternal Chaos

By Chaos-Slayer-

As I walk this barren wasteland
Nothing comes to mind
For I am no longer kind
I have seen many men die
As others sit there and lie
Families ripped appart by cold dead hands
Others walking and searching the land
The crisp morning air can no longer be smelled
While a new born is no longer held
But instead left for dead
His mother shall surely lose her head
For this unforgivable sin
This mother has lost all her kin
She returns to find him missing
Only now does she wish of kissing
The lost son she will never find
And now it shall haunt her mind
He now dreams of her decayed
If only she would of stayed
She then would know the truth about her son
He has trained for endless years and now is done
And ready to begin an eternal fight
against the ones that destroyed the light.

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Copyright 2003 Eric Lajeunesse
Published on Thursday, November 27, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Adam On Thursday, November 24, 2011, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    At first it seemed forced, not really flowing well. I liked it more towards the end though. I still think a few tweeks may make it even more awesome Scholar

  • Diva_Satanica On Sunday, November 21, 2004, Diva_Satanica (78)By person wrote:

    Jesus fuck...this is an awsome one. The darker the better.-D.S

  • A former member wrote: The two last lines are kick-ass, sent shivers down my spine.. Wow.. ~Wish Upon A Star

  • Methos On Saturday, January 10, 2004, Methos (121)By person wrote:

    not bad...a little tweaking could produce such more powerful results...but over all good work..-Methos

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    I dident like it at first, but then I started to scream it out.. and then I loved it :o)

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