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A moment of peace in this life from hell
a time to release my soul from its shell
To search my mind for hidden reasons
to find my way out of this harmony prison
Tough, where is my sanity now?
I seem to have lost it somehow
This storm is ripping me apart
I wish I could just amputate my heart
Why this sudden change of mind,
why search for thoughts I can't find?
If I found them would I want to know -
what's wrong with me, I don't think so
So confused, breaking apart
Wish I could amputate my heart
Turn me into stardust and blow me away
Not like you'll miss me anyway
Raging to find myself again
Warring for peace, sick of this pain
And so continues my Storm
an old soul taking a new form
Storm
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Copyright 2003 Storm
Published on Thursday, November 27, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
I love the amputate my heart line, very good and very relatable.
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On Wednesday, December 29, 2004, Anth
(1133)
wrote:
i love this work, the ending is phenominal, such a powerful work, the stardust line was excellent
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On Monday, March 8, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
For a girl who writes english as a third language, you really do have a grasp and depth of its inner workings...
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
"an old soul taking a new form " I really liked that line and it was a fitting end. very well done
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On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Mr King
(547) wrote:
beautiful transformation poem... empowering...
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A former member wrote:
"Wish I could amputate my heart" perfect way to describe the pain of loss as in storm, like being torn or to tear oneself to be rid of pain. "The Comedy of Errors", Adriana to Luciana: Great quote.
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On Thursday, November 27, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
Very good write hun. I loved the line "Turn me into stardust and blow me away" and of course the last line :) *hugs* :::OLd
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A former member wrote:
I really enjoyed this. Especially the line "Wish I could amputate my heart" Never really thought about it like that...but that makes sense...lol
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On Thursday, November 27, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Nice... I realy think this is good..
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