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lonliest child
By hopeless
the lonliest child lost in the wind
hoping someday someone will come
and save this lost soul within
no one wants to save me
no one even cares
tell me why should i live?
when i already gave all that i can give...
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Copyright 2003 hopeless
Published on Wednesday, November 26, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, May 17, 2004, Anth
(1133)
wrote:
those first 3 lines really moved me, elegant and touching work
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On Friday, February 6, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
oh splendid work, hopeless. i love it, and there's a lot of emotion there too
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On Tuesday, December 30, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
a most heartfelt plea......well done urban
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On Friday, December 26, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
your poems are so short, but they get the point across, I love how you write (u write from the heart), always do this and think this way and you can never go wrong.
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On Sunday, December 14, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Some one will see your soul one day I'm sure.. the waiting is the thing that hurt the most.. wonderfull written . Monkey
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On Tuesday, December 2, 2003, whispers in the night
(11) wrote:
:sigh: yet again you can read my mind suga....~cid
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, spaniellie
(76) wrote:
you have more in you to give to the world, i can tell by your write. dont let all the shitty people in this world get you down. there are a few good people here.
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
I've felt that way before. You just have to find something that makes you happy. writing, at least for me, is one thing that does just that. your feelings were well expressed here. Good write.
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