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the origin
By urbanhumility
It was in a "Creators" wish;
It was what saved you from
an Atheist hell..........
In whole, your essence...
Time played, Time glanced upon;
Times wilted promise....
The "water" that i drink;
The salt from my tears;
The "begining" that comes forth;
With the intensity of a firery sun-
Fail again,
There it has always "been"....
Waiting...........
my "will"
my "origin............
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Copyright 2003 urbanhumility
Published on Saturday, November 22, 2003.
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On Friday, December 8, 2017, bpathos
(78)
wrote:
This makes me think... about God. What better gift is there to us all. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
very nice and smooth penned work from you....it was also very profound lacking....nothing....i will be back to read more from you....thanks for sharing....rc/\ol
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A former member wrote:
Alot of people write poetry because they're self absorbed and they write about such frivolous things, people in general live their lives with this dry meaning and blank perception. I really respect that you take a deeper look into things and have passion for things like humanity and religion. I try my best to come as close as possible to write about the exact emotion that went through my head at the time of the event. Emotions are mainly what I write about because I've experienced so many of them it would be a shame to forget a single one even if it was miserably.
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On Monday, March 15, 2010, ANGELSLAYER
(118) wrote:
you seem to have rendered many speechless, and with good reason! As I have been struck dumb as well. nicely done
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On Sunday, July 23, 2006, waterchica999
(29) wrote:
I like your work its beautifully woven together
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Oh my... I really have no words to give you, for this has rendered me without.
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A former member wrote:
isn't it strange that such few words can tell a story??
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On Friday, December 31, 2004, sIo
(926) wrote:
*bows* you are the master....this kicked ass, the ending was superbly placed and. great job!
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
I agree, so great...I can't come up with anything to reflect such vision! ~b
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
More depressing than the actual reality of it...
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A former member wrote:
FUCK, do I know you? Why are we resonating at the same speed? I have a few like this, they search for the same. I feel like a puss, this piece almost made me cry, honest.
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On Monday, June 7, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
It's strange how in such few words meanings become endless in this piece *a most excellent piece* ~669~
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A former member wrote:
Well written, friend...an excellent poem...I love your use of quotation marks...it sets the piece alive.
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On Tuesday, December 16, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Blib.. this made me think. thanks for writing and posting this dude..
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Mr King
(547) wrote:
yes!!! makes me smile! awesome... inspiring... mind and heart opening... rise my brother... rise... 1love2us
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Mr King
(547) wrote:
the paradox of the Creator and the Self... which is which or are they one and the same? ... not an ego thing... a Love thang.
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On Saturday, November 22, 2003, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
a perplexing piece...you could be talking about the "origin" of many things...god, nature, soul, will, time....maybe it is all of them combined...i don't know....very good write...-l-
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