My ( kind of ) Suicide Note

By morbiddemonchild

Blood red
The vision in your head
It takes a cloud with rain
To wash away all this pain

The ivory branded handle of this knife
I still have found no purpose to live life
It started with a small, clean cut
Then after a while I just didn't give a fuck

The deeper it went the more I felt nothing
For all I knew the blood kept running
I cannot hide; I have no cover
But what does it matter; my life is over

NOTE: Hmmm...I'm feeling a little sad today.

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Published on Wednesday, November 19, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "My ( kind of ) Suicide Note"

A former member wrote: I like this one. Short and to the point, with sufficient imagery; nice work.
A former member wrote: ive feelt like that for a long time. your an awesome writer
On Saturday, October 28, 2006, Sealed Identity (31) wrote:

Good stuff.. I am in the mood you described right now.
A former member wrote: I feel like this sometimes too. You are a great writer... keep it up.
On Friday, May 28, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467) wrote:

Wow, you made that sound way too simple, so easy..great feeling. I'm so glad suicide isn't the answer, doesn't solve anything, but you made the picture so clear. ^_^
On Friday, April 2, 2004, DarkNTormented (12) wrote:

i like it alot its very well worded
On Friday, January 9, 2004, Moodswing (63) wrote:

simple ...suicide is the cowards way...your other works dont seem cowardly to me..
On Friday, January 9, 2004, Moodswing (63) wrote:

most often times i keep my opinions to myself on the cutting poems....but this once i feel the need to speak...cutting has become rather redundant...why do you choose to waste your obvious talent by following the "suicide fad"?? life is...plain and simpl
On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Clementine (121) wrote:

maybe things would be better if you offed yourself, whats stoping you?
On Sunday, February 1, 2004, SilentStalker (1066) wrote:

...me...
On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, morbiddemonchild (33) wrote:

Darun! You're right you do keep me from offing myself. But that;s a good thing.
On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Drea (1443) wrote:

Morbie!!!!...missed ya. now on to the poem. i found it to be beautiful in its images...morbie...you need me.. dpmail me. i know what you are going through. ~Drea~
On Thursday, November 20, 2003, SilentStalker (1066) wrote:

...hmmm...I usually don't care for suicidal poems, but I'll bend for ya, this one time...the imagery is rather good, and you seem to be getting more flexible with your rhyme scheme...nice work.
On Thursday, November 20, 2003, morbiddemonchild (33) wrote:

but I FEEL suicidal. I don't know why!! It's driving me mad! Today i made 3 small cuts. Now they sting. ~Morbie~
On Thursday, May 6, 2004, Twilight (1786) wrote:

o man
On Thursday, November 20, 2003, SilentStalker (1066) wrote:

...always just a DPmail away...though I know you better than that...keep in touch... -Darun
On Wednesday, November 19, 2003, Anybody_Killette (47) wrote:

Thats a VERY nice poem.. i enjoyed it.. it made me happy.. indeed.
On Wednesday, November 19, 2003, morbiddemonchild (33) wrote:

thank you very much. I appreciate that my work gets noticed.
A former member wrote: That poem FUCKING ROCKS! I LOVE IT, GOOD WORDS, MAKES ME FEEL PAIN< COULDNT GET BETTER, PRINTING AND PUTTING ON MY POETRY WALL OF FAME!!!!
On Thursday, May 6, 2004, Twilight (1786) wrote:

huh?

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