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Ashes and Souls
By Aurora_Light
Ashes to ashes, Dust to dust
Death has come, as it Must
Life is fading, as Day turns to Dusk
Love is strong, Pray that it lasts
Distance is painful, not Speaking is worse
Friends try their best, All fail in the end
Spirit to spirit, Soul to Soul
Friends come, and many leave
New friends come, yet are far away
They all have a problem, I wish I could help
Will they all fade, as others have?
Will I forever be lonely and sad?
Ashes to ashes, Dust to dust
Death has come, as it Must
Life is fading, as Day turns to Dusk
Spirit to spirit, Soul to Soul
Wind scatters the ashes as it blows and blows
Tears and blood mingle and mix
Forming a creature half pure and half dark
Ashes, Dust, Spirits, Souls
Death, Life, Day, Dusk
Thoughts running astray in the mind of Aurora Light
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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
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On Saturday, October 8, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(593)
wrote:
The flow in this is amazing! Brilliant piece overall. - 10:43
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A former member wrote:
A strong poem with strong beginning. Excellent work. Congratulations
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A former member wrote:
probably the first i've read of your work, i dig it.
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A former member wrote:
I really like how you tie it all together at the end.
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On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Don't take this the wrong way, this had a feeling of a teenager someone still finding their way through the early stages of life, made me reminiscent of my high school years...
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On Friday, January 9, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
from the start, your honesty of your inner emotion catches me......a seemigly vaccant picture you set before us........... well done my friend...........urban
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On Tuesday, January 6, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
A strong poem. The begining got a especialy strong power over me when I read it. Excellent work Light. Tiger
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On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
I, too, love the repetition is this. And with the darkness you have conjured here there still radiates a light. :) an Aurora Light. Beautiful. :::OLd
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On Thursday, November 27, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Wow Amanda....this has got to be one of my favorites from you...every word carried emotion, sincerity and uniqueness.....there is so much of you in here.....I agree with Stranger....there's all your talent written all over your work.
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On Monday, November 24, 2003, The_Scavenger
(30) wrote:
Once again you have out done yourself. Good job. Never stop writing, and never let anyone else stop you. Includeing the ones you hold close.
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On Wednesday, November 19, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
I always look forward to new work from you. And this is a truly excellent piece; shows off your talent.
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A former member wrote:
I like the repetition you use in this poem. And the questions you ask are very familiar... things I have, and probably many others, have asked before. I liked this. C-ya. ~ Asheai
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