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Lost Little Girl
By xX pretty vacant Xx
daddy, i said my first word today
and i smiled today
felt so safe today
daddy, i said my first word today
and i love you oh-so-much
daddy, i went to the park today
had so much fun today
the world's that kinda place today
daddy, i went to the park today
and i love you lots and lots
daddy, i kissed a boy today
was so nervous today
i'm so grown up today
daddy, i kissed a boy today
but i'm still your little girl
daddy, i got detention today
i guess i messed up today
i got so angry today
daddy, i got detention today
and i kinda love you too
daddy, i cut my wrist today
it's all so empty today
i just don't care today
daddy, i cut my wrist today
and i'd love you if i could feel
daddy, i think i died today
i saw you cry today
and i miss you today
daddy, i think i died today
still just your lost little girl
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Copyright 2003 Laura....
Published on Sunday, November 16, 2003.
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On Saturday, November 3, 2018, Lab Rat
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wrote:
makes me want to wake up my own daughter and give her a few moments of hugs....
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A former member wrote:
this is a beautiful poem. the repetition reminds me of a nursery rhyme. and the simpleness shifts from being young and innocent in the beginning to being hopeless in the end. Very pretty.
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A former member wrote:
WoW! speechless. im just missing that last one of dyeing and im the exact words of this poem
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On Sunday, June 13, 2004, Heart of Stone
(24) wrote:
I absolutely love this. I love my dad to death, but this poem makes me sort of see how much I really put him through. This is good. -Heart
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A former member wrote:
hmm... sad; very well written.. just because people have kids doesn't mean they're parents, or good ones at that. i may have pulled something a little different from this, but what i got was a girl looking for her father's love, and she got it a bit late
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On Saturday, January 3, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
W.O.W. I CAN SAY NOTHING ELSE...W.O.W.
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A former member wrote:
woah! fuck that was awesome! i love the way it was written, the structure. i also love the repatition you used. it made the message all the more powerful. keep it up. i really liked this one
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On Monday, November 17, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
creepy and sad.. i like it
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