What I Love About You

By SilentStalker

You asked me time and time again, what I like about you
The things that over such hard times has kept my love so true
And so I have compiled a list of things that I adore
That if you could not share with me, my life would be a bore...

I love the way you look at me;
I love the way you smile
I love the way you speak to me
and hold me all the while

I love the way you help me out
and keep me in my place
I love the way you sleep with such
a cute smile on your face

I love the way you jump into
my arms when you get scared
I love the times that I hold you
when you just washed your hair

I love you when you tread me bad
I love it when you're nice
I love when you look up to me
and ask me for advice

I love the way you make me laugh
I love the way you cry
I love the way you scold me when
you catch me in a lie

I love you when you make me mad
I love you when you scream
I love it when I fall asleep
and see you in my dream

I love the funny face you make
whenever you're confused
I love the way you laugh out loud
whenever you're amused

I love the times you hold my hand
when we go on a date
I love the funny way you look
when you sleep in too late...

And there are all the simple things that make our times so sweet
You make me feel like I am whole; you keep me on my feet
I cannot ask for any more than all that we now share
For you've already blessed my life by simply being there.

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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Published on Thursday, November 6, 2003.     Filed under: "Love" and "List"
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  • A former member wrote: this is so sweet... I love it.... awesome poem

  • A former member wrote: Truly beautiful and romantic. :)

  • Invisible Girl On Thursday, August 30, 2012, Invisible Girl (134)By person wrote:

    I love this poem! A very sweet side of you Darun :)

  • Musik2MyEyes On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (193)By person wrote:

    Awwww epically romantic.

  • gnrrain On Saturday, July 24, 2010, gnrrain (19)By person wrote:

    Agreed. Epic in that almost everyone can relate to most if not all written here.

  • BrokenButterflyWings On Sunday, August 16, 2009, BrokenButterflyWings (33)By person wrote:

    Beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: These words are simply heartbreaking. I think, no, I Know many people can relate to this including me, except the fact i'm single now...

  • Mari On Monday, December 17, 2007, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    beyond sweet. priceless

  • elisa On Friday, September 1, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    caught in a moment of silence....the daily axe grind [frozen] in a vacuum -the way you frame the face of love...so very intimate.

  • A former member wrote: i loved the last four lines the most

  • Vexed On Saturday, May 27, 2006, Vexed (74)By person wrote:

    completely blew me away...it was so sweet that I almost thought a female wrote it...it was so sweet that it almost made me cry...it reminded me of the poem from the movie "Ten Things I Hate About You" I think I will bookmark it...

  • yslehc On Friday, April 2, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    hehe i think i read this before but i'm not too sure.. it's cute, made me smile.. nice job

  • Moodswing On Saturday, November 29, 2003, Moodswing (63)By person wrote:

    wow.....i should expect the unexpected...but this was like finding a cavern full of precious gems....you are amazing

  • OLd SouL On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    very touching. I am glad you shared. :::OLd

  • A Velvet Tongue On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    aww the stuffing inside the psycho bear...nice to know behind every shield there is a body...Loved this piece Darun...*smooch* *Vel*

  • Liz On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Liz (267)By person wrote:

    So killing bitches isn't the only thing that makes you all warm and fuzzy, eh? You see there, I knew you weren't just a creepy necrophiliac. This is a wonderful write, you kept going where I would have run out of steam, and closed beautifully.

  • A former member wrote: yeah as said above...sweet.....it's that a guy can actually write things like this down....right on

  • A former member wrote: Awww...I haven't read this one before. It's so sweet. LOL...Yep, I think you're losing axe points as I type this. Really though...this is...awww...lol

  • SilentStalker On Thursday, November 6, 2003, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...yeah...one reason I was contemplating not posting these...oh well...even the axeman has a heart somewhere...haha... Scholar

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