Split You

By SilentStalker

You fight
You plead
I tie you to the tree
I pick my axe up from the ground
And hold it angrily

I swing
You scream
You're begging me to stop
The wood is parting hastily
With every single chop

I laugh
You cry
I swing my axe again
I want to see you when it falls
Your death will entertain

It's cut
I pause
You curse me for my sin
I give the tree a hefty push
And step back with a grin

It sways
It tips
It's falling to the ground
Combined with screams of fear and pain
It makes a wondrous sound

It drops
You break
Your body torn in two
I watch in wonder as you bleed
Then give my axe to you

One strike
One chop
Your head falls in the dirt
I had to end your life my way
While I can make it hurt

I'm bored
I search
You're not the only one
I will not end this slaughter yet
I'm having too much fun

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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Published on Sunday, November 2, 2003.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Lyrics"
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  • sIo On Tuesday, December 27, 2016, sIo (887)By person wrote:

    Yep, that's a wrap. I'm officially done reading your work for now. Maybe forever. Axe man.

  • LostInDarkness On Saturday, June 2, 2012, LostInDarkness (65)By person wrote:

    a simply wonderful and dark piece, i shall think about it all night. it is amazing

  • DarkDruidess On Sunday, May 6, 2012, DarkDruidess (357)By person wrote:

    Left a wicked grin upon my face...thanks for the images that I will take into my dreams....

  • Aunty Depressant On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Aunty Depressant (436)By person wrote:

    You give "giving someone the axe" a nice descriptive bend.

  • purr_verse On Monday, November 10, 2003, purr_verse (1038)By person wrote:

    Have you heard GGFH? This really reminds me of their stuff. Which is an excellent thing, by the way...

  • WinterGrave On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, WinterGrave (271)By person wrote:

    *wooo*i wanna try!...~~~Grave

  • A former member wrote: oh the blood , the death, and the pure out anger of it all, hah, great work darun, its sick and twisted and its just what i like to see

  • yslehc On Sunday, November 2, 2003, yslehc (340)By person wrote:

    i love it!.. that would be an awsome song... i think it could have a chorus, but it doesnt really need one

  • A former member wrote: pardon my being expletive, but this is fuckin' sick (really good). You could easily throw this into a song. wicked and just what my imagination has been missing for a while.

  • A former member wrote: You sick... twisted... bastard. I LOVE IT!!! -C-

  • Drea On Sunday, November 2, 2003, Drea (1529)By person wrote:

    hehehehe i like..*yay* you got your axe back ~Drea~

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