at a loss for words
By Jonas
pre-dawn relics
wearethis
3am
in the words flowing in the gloam of angels robes hanging
in the air just over my bed
in the exstatic moans of everyday penetration
in chinese coin token worth something to no one but the owner as it is
quite different from the everyday shake of his american pocket change
some days i'll masturbate
three
or
four
times thinking what if i die tonite singing hymns while i'm pulling at
it to make sure i'll be alright
allright
post war pieces
blasted bits of alabaster
wearethis
santa doesn't stop
but flies faster over the third world
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Copyright 2003 Fish
Published on Saturday, November 1, 2003.
Filed under:
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On Sunday, March 8, 2015, Dismalmind
(27) wrote:
I liked your poetry, Its original and reflective, kinda kinky but I liked your work.
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On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, monalisamarie
(113) wrote:
I'm speechless this was beyond amazing. Truly.
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
This was nicely insane... can I say that.. well I mean it.. good work. *reads it once again*
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
Perhaps you are the bastard child of Mr. Cohen... Either way, there is something here that speaks of him. And that is as high a compliment as this existence allows me.
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On Sunday, November 16, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
I agree...being an avid Cohen fan...I can so deeply see his infulence (albeit hidden or not)..in this piece Fish...
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On Sunday, November 16, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
and indeed seeing as I havent been able to pen anything to honour leo..(he is that idolized to me) know it is prestigious to say the least, in loving this piece of yours...
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On Friday, November 28, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
fun thing is i've only ever read one cohen piece... otherwise i am ignorant to him. yay for the reality of my originiality. i am super special!
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On Friday, November 28, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
*shrugs shoulders* ... must stop drinking so much caffffeeeeeiiine
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On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
i mispellled 'allright' on porpose dont aks me why.
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On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
cause you're some kind of mad genius. or just mad. :) i love this, i just... have nothing intelligent to say.
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
No, I think it's because he's feening for some burritos...