at a loss for words

By Jonas

pre-dawn relics


wearethis


3am


in the words flowing in the gloam of angels robes hanging
in the air just over my bed
in the exstatic moans of everyday penetration
in chinese coin token worth something to no one but the owner as it is quite different from the everyday shake of his american pocket change

some days i'll masturbate
three
or
four
times thinking what if i die tonite singing hymns while i'm pulling at it to make sure i'll be alright
allright

post war pieces


blasted bits of alabaster

wearethis

santa doesn't stop
but flies faster over the third world

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Copyright 2003 Fish
Published on Saturday, November 1, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dismalmind On Sunday, March 8, 2015, Dismalmind (27)By person wrote:

    I liked your poetry, Its original and reflective, kinda kinky but I liked your work.

  • monalisamarie On Tuesday, March 7, 2006, monalisamarie (113)By person wrote:

    I'm speechless this was beyond amazing. Truly.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    This was nicely insane... can I say that.. well I mean it.. good work. *reads it once again*

  • Stranger On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Stranger (264)By person wrote:

    Perhaps you are the bastard child of Mr. Cohen... Either way, there is something here that speaks of him. And that is as high a compliment as this existence allows me.

  • A Velvet Tongue On Sunday, November 16, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    I agree...being an avid Cohen fan...I can so deeply see his infulence (albeit hidden or not)..in this piece Fish...

  • A Velvet Tongue On Sunday, November 16, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    and indeed seeing as I havent been able to pen anything to honour leo..(he is that idolized to me) know it is prestigious to say the least, in loving this piece of yours...

  • Jonas On Friday, November 28, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    fun thing is i've only ever read one cohen piece... otherwise i am ignorant to him. yay for the reality of my originiality. i am super special!

  • Jonas On Friday, November 28, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    *shrugs shoulders* ... must stop drinking so much caffffeeeeeiiine

  • Jonas On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    i mispellled 'allright' on porpose dont aks me why.

  • KittyStryker On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    cause you're some kind of mad genius. or just mad. :) i love this, i just... have nothing intelligent to say.

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    No, I think it's because he's feening for some burritos...

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