Alive But For A Little While

By XCryingMinotaurX

"Alive?"
"Yes"
"Good"

Alive but for a little while,
I'm still going home and slitting my wrists.

You know I always speak the truth,
and I would not lie to you.

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Copyright 2003 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Sunday, October 26, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Broken Rose On Tuesday, December 29, 2015, Broken Rose (9)By person wrote:

    Very reflective nice piece..

  • A former member wrote: like they said...right to the point and sacry LOL.....=D nice

  • Dayer On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    short & to the point, nice write

  • Beautiful Scars On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    Short, but truthfull, and scary...Very very different..I really wish that my upgrade would happen soon so I could add this to my favorites.....-fairy-

  • knightmirror On Monday, March 8, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    blunt,honest,and effective little piece you have here.knight

  • A former member wrote: dying pleased!!

  • Loserland On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    damn...that's blunt...powerful

  • KittyStryker On Sunday, October 26, 2003, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    mm. you know... yeah. exactly. you know. ::hug::

  • Six-Out On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    BWAHAHA!

  • yslehc On Sunday, October 26, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    weird, i like it

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