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By red_haze
calm desert
sand and sand and sand
yellow waves
crashing
slipping silently
backward
an endless journey
passing through
my head
and i see
refracted reflection
not smiling
wasted mind
i laugh and laugh and laugh
but deep inside
labyrinthine
seemingly simple
i am lost
and your hand
not shaking
long fingers
reaching
twists temptingly
out of reach
with your breath
you lie and lie and lie
your eyes
sincere
honestly hiding
secrets
and my trouble
you found
an easy pleasure
watching
patiently passing
the time
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Copyright 2003 red_haze
Published on Tuesday, October 21, 2003.
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On Sunday, May 25, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
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wrote:
Wonderfull write. Wonderfull flow and feel.
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On Sunday, May 25, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
i felt compelled to read this backwards.... and it made perfect sense. simply amazing.
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A former member wrote:
I really liked the second and last stanzas. I could really feel the confusion and can definitely relate to this. ~Ship!
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
I can hear this whispered in my head... the repetition of words ("sand and sand and sand," etc.) gives it a great deal of beauty and strength.
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On Monday, January 19, 2004, red_haze
(52) wrote:
you are too kind.
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
...and I see something superb! Thank you. ~ mw
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, red_haze
(52) wrote:
nice comments from you mean a lot to me.
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A former member wrote:
Now THAT'S a new take on "playa's". Refreshing.
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, red_haze
(52) wrote:
thanks!
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