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Rip of My Wings
By Storm
Rip off my wings
claw out my eyes
Lock me up
and melt the key
You can cut out my heart
and invade my world
Just violate my mind
and rape my soul
Torture my body
Take my life away
It doesn't matter to me
No Pain, you see
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Copyright 2003 Storm
Published on Monday, October 20, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, November 7, 2004, A Velvet Tongue
(436)
wrote:
pain....a wonderful extension of raw pleasure...or are they one in the same?..great penning here...More please!
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, ThoughtsOthoughts
(14) wrote:
pain is only felt when you let it take over you...intense writing...well written
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A former member wrote:
No Pain? How do you do that? Beautiful and powerful.
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A former member wrote:
the more i read it the more i love it! keep it up!!
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A former member wrote:
this is great! i feel the emotion coming from it.
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On Friday, January 9, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
not bad.. reminds me of Suicideseasons buttrfly poem. where he ribs of the wings. this could be a poem in contrats to it.. wonderfull. Monkey
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
Definitely... they're both great poems, too. They should be posted next to each other somewhere... it would make for an awesome contrast of ideas.
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On Friday, December 19, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I was drawn in by the title and am glad I was - good one! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
I like this...no pain...good write-Siva
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A former member wrote:
Painful poem in itself. welldone xb.sx
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A former member wrote:
I really like this, good work
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