Admittedly a Cutter

By cre

as the night falls
and darkness grows
I try to think of other things
but time seems painfully slow
across the room
the glint of a sharpened blade
catches my worried eyes
and suddenly everything fades
Lost in this world
I forget the words of my friends
I know what must be done
this tangled madness has to end
I reach for the instrument
the tool of my relief
Biting back a tear
I promise myself that it will be brief
I close my eyes
and I slash here and there
It's done, and I smile
Ohh! This style looks awesome on my HAIR!

haha! *chuckles*

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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Tuesday, October 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, July 20, 2021, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    Haha..Brilliant :0)

  • A former member wrote: made me giggle and cringe because its funny yet ive been there

  • Niemand On Friday, May 23, 2008, Niemand (361)By person wrote:

    Hehe

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    I missed your sense of humor. Glad to be back and reading your works again! -Heather-

  • A former member wrote: yep, i fell for it... what a twist!

  • A former member wrote: lol that was great

  • Graveyard_Desciple On Tuesday, May 17, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple (39)By person wrote:

    ha ha, fuckin awesome!

  • so_skeevy On Monday, April 11, 2005, so_skeevy (64)By person wrote:

    Sweet man. totally good.

  • A former member wrote: Saved by that last line!

  • A former member wrote: That was awesome lol. I totally fell for it. God one.

  • A former member wrote: hahahaha, love it! great write!

  • A former member wrote: Good job man!

  • Im_going_to_cry_now On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Im_going_to_cry_now (24)By person wrote:

    I applaud this poem

  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, December 1, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    heh, And here I was prepaired to leave a bitchy comment...thanks for spairing the stale bs...love it Scholar

  • Rone4611 On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Rone4611 (123)By person wrote:

    That was hallarious! Great write.

  • A former member wrote: haha that was very clever. i loved the twist it was very funny and i laughed every time i read it. amazing.

  • A former member wrote: nice! i've read this poem several times, and never once has it not made me laugh! great ;)

  • Zara Synn On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Zara Synn (57)By person wrote:

    Ah, you had me going there for a minute! hehe. Awesome twist.

  • mysticventures On Friday, September 3, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    excellent jest!!

  • Jonas On Friday, September 3, 2004, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    clever clever ;-)

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Friday, September 3, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    *laughs* This is awesome! Bravo!

  • A former member wrote: sehr gut. great (anti)climax

  • Storm On Saturday, July 10, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    hehe, how sneaky sneaky of you.´Good one.

  • Lemons On Friday, April 2, 2004, Lemons (46)By person wrote:

    I enjoy this poem uber much!

  • A former member wrote: Yeah, awesome write, I can't say anything that hasnt been said already so I'll just leave it at that...

  • Mindless fairy On Saturday, January 31, 2004, Mindless fairy (8)By person wrote:

    This is great! gotta love it! ~~The Mindless One~~

  • sole On Saturday, November 15, 2003, sole (93)By person wrote:

    hah the ol bait and switch. I was all ready to get cloudy eyed and you dropped a bomb. Well done.

  • finaldestiny On Tuesday, November 11, 2003, finaldestiny (74)By person wrote:

    omg this has got to be this best poem! absolutly perfect!~finaldestiny~

  • Drea On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    LMAO... i was all.."hummm cre? a cutter?" yeah ok this was just too funny.. i'm still rolling. ~Drea~

  • Trichotillomaniac On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Trichotillomaniac (42)By person wrote:

    Love it! You made it sound as if you were upset in the beginning. I'm sure you're hair does look AWESOME!

  • A former member wrote: HHAAA. Love it. I was a little worried with the title but I love this. Great job. You've lightened my spirits. *n*a*

  • Seraphic On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    hehe priceless, i love it *~seraph~*

  • Delphoid-Q On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    Hehehe... *falls on the floor and starts laughing harder*. Bri-llli-ant ;)

  • manywalks On Saturday, October 18, 2003, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Hehehehe, ah, thank you, I needed that. ~ mw

  • Loserland On Saturday, October 18, 2003, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    i sense the sarcasm but you play it perfectly...well done

  • yslehc On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    lol awsome i love it

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    wery well done :)

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    a laugh needed.

  • TheMistressBucket On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, TheMistressBucket (18)By person wrote:

    Hahaha! How fucking cool! You had me going for a sec...What a lovely twist! ;)

  • GreekPhilosopher On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Hehehe... Finally, A Cutter Poem I Can Actually Read. Thanks, GPhD.

  • CharlottesWeb On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    Wit at its best! hehe...of course I had to go back and reread a second time just for a full belly laugh. Funnier yet...hehe...I did that once! Got mad and chopped off my hair!! hehe...I loved this! ~JMDW~

  • GothicBlack On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, GothicBlack (186)By person wrote:

    HAHAHA! this one's great! i love the ending... perfect. ~gothic~

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    God damn you Jane, had me going for a bit. I was afraid I'd have to leave you a nasty comment :-D. Heh, good stuff.


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