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Winter Solstice
By Spiritus_Frumenti
It is a much sadder day,
Passed the time we laid
Happy with each other’s touch
When our breath became one
And our hearts pulsed the same
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It is a much darker place,
After the fiery lust had died
And the blaze of passion,
That once consumed my head
Now is wrapped in cold sheets of hate
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It is a much lonelier life,
When you have seen the stars
Felt joy from having to breathe
In the presence of the Gods,
To now remain amorphous
In your mind, and remember,
Under a graying sky
And a chilling air,
Suggesting a close December...
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Copyright 2003 Juan A. Thomas
Published on Saturday, October 11, 2003.
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Comments on "Winter Solstice"
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A former member wrote:
this is a good poem. i really like it. it speaks to your soul, not your mind
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(274)
wrote:
beautiful description, Thanks for sharing.
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On Wednesday, January 17, 2007, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
This caught my eye for it's name and my nastalgic ways...Many times I click on a poem by random chance leaving annoyed at my wasted time. I'm very happy I read this...it is beautiful, and holds such perfect form. Thank you for sharing.
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On Tuesday, August 15, 2006, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
ooo, somehow your words are just delicious. that is the only way I can explain it.
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On Tuesday, January 3, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
distant.....why do some memories grow colder with time.......well done.............urban
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On Sunday, August 28, 2005, abattoir
(115) wrote:
when it wore off like "extasy" you become .. just hung-over.this wrt was amazing
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On Sunday, August 28, 2005, abattoir
(115) wrote:
and how can one have ever been able to love another in the thick of want, to come down to later,when at last....
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
*transposes self into northern hemispheres for this one* Beautiful write. I agree with Solace. Wonderfully atmospheric.
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
Chilling, cold, and true.
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On Thursday, January 15, 2004, IceDragoness
(195) wrote:
Very nice, i like this a lot ~Dawn
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On Thursday, November 20, 2003, Solace
(1069) wrote:
That was the most beautiful poem i have read in a long time... "Suggesting a close December" is perfect to say the least...
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A former member wrote:
This was beaitiful, Juan, I love Pagan-related poetry and you really know how to write it. Beautiful and fresh. *Lilith*
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