The stars have abandonned us

By Alectozere

Night sky of a dark ink
Shining stars, stars which blink
Clouds floating, there goes the wind
Howling sound, furious whirlwind

Flashing lights in the dead of night
Twinkle, twinkle, share your light
Moon, halo of silver, halo of gold
Guide the travellers, save them from the cold

Twirling world, raging nature
How will it be in the future?
Fading sky in front of the eyes
The stars fade like a firefly dies

The way is lost, the wind has won
The clouds have blinded us, our guide is gone
Moon of silver, who has seen through time
Stars in the sky, witnesses of all crimes

Tell us, wanderers of the night
This darkness we are in, is this the end of our fight?
Is this how a journey ends?
Dying in the dark, wind killing our friends

The cold biting through our bones
Raging rain hitting us like stones
Screams unheard as everyone suffers
Falling on the uncaring ground, calling for their mothers

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Copyright 2019 Alectozere
Published on Thursday, June 27, 2019.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • RaheemaFKM On Thursday, July 11, 2019, RaheemaFKM (151)By person wrote:

    Bleak but beautiful, dark and lingering. I did enjoy reading this and all the imagery you painted was very gorgeous to see. Your shadows spoke to me with the voice of angels fallen from heaven and ripped away from their wings too soon. Thank you for sharing. -smiles-

  • Just Dave On Friday, June 28, 2019, Just Dave (564)By person wrote:

    Very profound. Got darker and darker with each line. Great write. JD

  • 13sonsofgod On Thursday, June 27, 2019, 13sonsofgod (777)By person wrote:

    Tell us, wanderers of the night This darkness we are in, is this the end of our fight. ....splendid write ! And as one in the deepest darkness I shall tell you truth, your fight has never been with darkness, but it's adversaries of this life...again, well done...

  • Alectozere On Thursday, June 27, 2019, Alectozere (14)By person wrote:

    I love the answer you gave!

  • 13sonsofgod On Thursday, June 27, 2019, 13sonsofgod (777)By person wrote:

    As I am honored by your work and words....welcome here..

  • Dilated View On Thursday, June 27, 2019, Dilated View (672)By person wrote:

    You painted a really bleak landscape and asked some interesting questions throughout. The visuals you used I felt really worked well, I could feel myself shivering . That slow death despite the struggle. I can feel this as literal and metaphor and thought in both senses it resonated. Thank you for sharing :)

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