This Simple Love

By Midnight Phoenix

Dear Love,

I’m thinking about you again tonight
Falling asleep with my thoughts wrapped around you
I’m dreaming about you again tonight
Since when does dreaming ever do me any good

I guess I can hope you feel the same way
Sometimes I feel waiting wastes my life though
So when you’ve had time to grow on your own
You’ll be the first to hear that my heart belongs to you

This may sound cliché or generic but this is how I feel
My dreams remind me every night
Would I be sacrificing everything if I opened my mind to you
To tell you that you make this feel right

So cross my heart
It’s open wide
If you’ll believe what I believe
We’ll make it perfect in time
This simple love

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Copyright 2003 little nemo
Published on Thursday, October 2, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ComeLittleLeaves On Tuesday, May 10, 2011, ComeLittleLeaves (11)By person wrote:

    Beautifully written...flowing and lovely...wonderful to read :)

  • Nameless Pariah On Tuesday, May 10, 2011, Nameless Pariah (126)By person wrote:

    Simply touching.

  • Invader Lyn On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, Invader Lyn (48)By person wrote:

    This makes me very sad. To know what you are capable of, and to know that you are selective about who you show it to.

  • A former member wrote: This poem was very touching to me, something very rare indeed. Like always, a great write-Siva

  • CharlottesWeb On Monday, October 27, 2003, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    It's always great when the author can master the waves of meter with the theme, and have it all sound...so right and together. Was a pleasant read, soft and slow...and just a telling. ~JMDW~

  • manywalks On Friday, October 3, 2003, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Soft, silent, simple, superbly stroking my soul with its beauty. ~ mw

  • maddin foxxxy On Thursday, October 2, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    This is so simply understood and beautiful.....she is a lucky lady. "perfect in time"....this is the way love should get indeed.

  • Sinnocence On Thursday, October 2, 2003, Sinnocence (49)By person wrote:

    i love everything you do. but something about the simplicity in this one truly touched me. it immediately became one of my favorites

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