When Bunnies Attack

By SilentStalker


She used to love the bunnies
She held them day and night
Until one day she realized
That something wasn't right

Her buddy tried to warn her
Before he disappeared
That something had gone far too wrong
And she was next, he feared

The bunnies wouldn't let him
They met him at the door
It's still unknown how they sprayed all
His blood across the floor.

When she came to the doorstep
She found her buddy's head
And before she could cry for help
The little girl was dead

She used to love the bunnies
And now they love her so
Her skull is with them in their cage
And they won't let it go..

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Copyright 2003 Darun Ferguson
Published on Wednesday, October 1, 2003.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

this is as best a tribute I can give for Fawn's (darkbride) 'one line motivation'.
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  • LordColdwater On Sunday, January 8, 2017, LordColdwater (31)By person wrote:

    "That's no ordinary rabbit, that's the most foul, cruel and bad tempered rodent you ever set eyes on" -Tim

  • A former member wrote: Bunnies gone bad....lol. I enjoyed reading your work. You are an inspiration.

  • A former member wrote: fucking awesome!! PHEAR ZE BUNNY!

  • A former member wrote: heheh. this was hilarious.

  • A former member wrote: I lovelovelove the way this is humorous, but oh so evil! ;) Blessed Be!

  • Ashteroth On Wednesday, January 28, 2009, Ashteroth (192)By person wrote:

    I like the style if these little pieces.

  • denver nitze On Tuesday, March 18, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    runny babbits!!... are evil. hasn't anyone read watership down. gotta watch your back with those little f*ckers. :) fun write. ~ta~

  • Circe Avalon On Wednesday, December 26, 2007, Circe Avalon (115)By person wrote:

    I loved it! Bunnies can be a bit vicious!

  • A former member wrote: wow, a bit gory and bloody. Made me smile.("Says alot about me") N E Ways. My mother raised rabbits for the majority of my childhood and I can think of of bunnies that fit this poem way too well. Excellent write Darun. ][ ][

  • A former member wrote: bunnies show their true.....fuzziness. wat they do when the parents aren't home. great write

  • A former member wrote: woah. disturbing and yet, completely awesome.

  • A former member wrote: still the best thing ive ever read! much love, AMBER HXC

  • Err0r On Sunday, July 15, 2007, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    Bwahahahaa. :D This should be a childrens story!!!! :D

  • A former member wrote: I am never going to have a bunny now...

  • Savannah On Monday, June 25, 2007, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    Dude, this freaked me out! lol

  • Moonflower On Sunday, June 24, 2007, Moonflower (301)By person wrote:

    kind of adorable ;)

  • A former member wrote: I will never look at bunnies the same now. thank you.

  • A former member wrote: I still love the bunnies...

  • SilentStalker On Wednesday, March 28, 2007, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ...where the hell have you been, lady...? I was, like, Just thinking about you, and there you commented... Scholar

  • Bella Butchery On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    fucking excellent

  • A former member wrote: hehehe

  • A former member wrote: that was great!

  • Nail Bunny On Thursday, September 21, 2006, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    Look out for us Bunnies. We're vicious. *Laughing* this work is still so fantastic...

  • l mo On Thursday, July 6, 2006, l mo (55)By person wrote:

    ...and i thought bunnies were such cute, innocent creatures.

  • PassionateDarkDesire On Saturday, May 20, 2006, PassionateDarkDesire (28)By person wrote:

    This is great!!... I always thought the bunnies hiding in the bushes were up to something! lmao!

  • Vicious Pixie On Friday, May 12, 2006, Vicious Pixie (62)By person wrote:

    lmao....makes me think of the killer rabbit from that monty python movie. now i know why this is such a favorite.

  • Nail Bunny On Saturday, April 29, 2006, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    As a Bunny, I must say, wow. I love this write, and am so glad I found it. You just made my day.

  • A former member wrote: Sick and twisted and perfect ;) The words flow tremendously...not a missed beat or anything... DEATHBUNNIES RULE

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, January 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    Psychotic I loved it *bunnies Ick* To think I used to own them*Shivers*

  • blue On Saturday, February 12, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    :):) hehe that was good, wickedly good. ~b

  • Sticky Kitty On Saturday, February 12, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    funny, sweet and morbid a sickly mixture -kitty

  • A former member wrote: lol It's been awhile since I read this one as well. I still love it! lol damn bunnies.

  • A former member wrote: I told you those bunnies are out to kill us all! *Runs away screaming*

  • Railway_Butterfly On Wednesday, June 23, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (354)By person wrote:

    lol!Ooooh I liked this...once again,the piece flows wonderfully....damn bunnies!! *shakes fist*..xxx...

  • Guttercat On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, Guttercat (30)By person wrote:

    Morbid... but cute. =) What's next? Killer Hamsters from Mars? Give that man a beer.

  • Cinn On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Cinn (152)By person wrote:

    ha this was great and yeah very monty pythonesque theres just something about bunnies......they can't be that innocent and cute and fluffy.....

  • A former member wrote: Sounds like the Killer Rabbit from the Holy Grail got loose again! Yay for fluf of fear!

  • HeLlSeND On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, HeLlSeND (40)By person wrote:

    i knew i liked rabbits for a reason..though i must admit, radioactive butterflies would prolly scare tha shit outta me....

  • SilentStalker On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    hahaha.... Scholar

  • OLd SouL On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    Reminds me of Moldy Peaches. Anyway, this was refreshing... thanks for the treat.

  • Crystal Passion On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    i remember i saw a movie once about killer bunnies... i must go find my security blanket now...

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