Traffic and Wedding Dates

By tmanzano

You turned too quickly.

I was half off the curb
when you did.

My foot hit the ground and
pulled back as fast.

You stretched yourself 
around me
narrowly missing 

everything.

I have the movie 
in my head.

You looking at me
in slow motion 

starring into me 

hair whistling in the wind 

half pulled out your 
rolled down window.

Your hands

both on the wheel 

gripped tight enough 
to know you knew 

you were close 
to killing me.

You pressed 
up against the door 

in a hurry 

for wherever 
you were heading.

Your tic-tac's sliding 
across the dash 

crashing against the pillar.

We were caught 
in mid-air

paused in the gravity 

in as much
to find our feet
as our brakes.

Our mouths 
slightly opened 

as we screeched 

in a rage 
around our corners.

We almost changed 
our lives forever.

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Copyright 2018 tmanzano
Published on Wednesday, August 8, 2018.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Close call fiancé
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  • Luna Jay On Thursday, August 9, 2018, Luna Jay (540)By person wrote:

    Wow this was intense. Your words painted a clear picture of the even in my mind. Very clever, particularly the tic tacs sliding, I could visualise it all so clearly. Bravo 👏

  • tmanzano On Friday, August 10, 2018, tmanzano (215)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much Luna Jay... I’m glad you enjoyed it.

  • dwells On Wednesday, August 8, 2018, dwells (5780)By person wrote:

    A skillful blend of bodies in motion, and a near miss for a Mr. and a Miss. The driver and the driven. Cheers TM - Dan

  • tmanzano On Wednesday, August 8, 2018, tmanzano (215)By person wrote:

    Always a pleasure to read your comments and your work sir... Very grateful. ~TM

  • hazydaisy On Wednesday, August 8, 2018, hazydaisy (166)By person wrote:

    Loved the imagery, loved the pacing, loved the word choice. Excellent indeed.

  • tmanzano On Wednesday, August 8, 2018, tmanzano (215)By person wrote:

    Holy crap have I missed you... where have you been?? You cleared all of your work. You are one of three of my favorite writers here. I am gad to see you back. lease write something. Thank you for your comment on this, but I am sure I am not the only one that misses your work. ~TM

  • I IS ME On Wednesday, August 8, 2018, I IS ME (545)By person wrote:

    This puts us right there seeing, hearing, sharing this moment. It's like we got the plates number for you. We really enjoyed. Please continue

  • tmanzano On Wednesday, August 8, 2018, tmanzano (215)By person wrote:

    HA! That's great. Thank you I IS ME!! ~TM

  • Bornfrompain On Wednesday, August 8, 2018, Bornfrompain (791)By person wrote:

    This was excellent! - BFP

  • tmanzano On Wednesday, August 8, 2018, tmanzano (215)By person wrote:

    Humbled BFP... ~TM

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