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I've been eaten
By Jonas Robinson
Eaten still like moths
Worms of ghost worlds
Savagely killing all in their paths
I have such beauty
An amber stone
Crimson in the moonlight
A mist of fragance
Lit into our world
Through air so deep
The night doth weep
Though, eaten still
And eaten more
On the bathroom floor
The mighty roar
And I can't help but wonder
Do they eat for pleasure
Do they eat for pride
Do they eat until they're sick inside
Will they stop when I have died...
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On Monday, January 14, 2019, FearlessDragon
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wrote:
I really like the interpretations here. The harsh imagery helps deliver the point even better. "Thou eaten still, amd eaten more, on the bathroom floor, the mighty roar." This line especially reminds me of a song by Dismantled titled "The Bathroom Floor"... Well done here.
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On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
I'll have to look up that poem. I'm not sure if I have all ready read it. I'm glad you enjoyed those lines. Thank you for your feedback and praise. :)
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On Sunday, July 22, 2018, dwells
(4285) wrote:
The gothic influence is indeed a dark one and seems to be a phase, usually, until we move on to something else. Meanwhile, we search for that which is missing; for something better if not self-explanatory in the mystery that is us. Cheers JR and be well my friend - Dan
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On Sunday, July 22, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
I don't know if I'll ever find a way out of darkness. But, thanks for the therapy. :)
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On Wednesday, July 18, 2018, I IS ME
(406) wrote:
We read this and we think of all the people continually taking little bites out of us out of society. It makes us think
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On Thursday, July 19, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
Yes, that's what I was going for. :)
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A former member wrote:
A very good ink my friend
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On Thursday, July 19, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(867) wrote:
Ink is what I spill. :)
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