zooming down a shocking blu highway

By Devil lyn



hulluciginations, they zoom down
a shocking blu highway
it`s zero paved, 120 degrees
of quadriplegic poetry disseminates;
tourniquets unhinge from
the bowels of the scorpions
holding parasols
for roaches crossing through
the acidic rains;
no pain, no memory of this place
only that
I think I love`d you
inside a mushroom
tarped by a gray sky  

 

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Copyright 2018 Devil lyn
Published on Tuesday, July 3, 2018.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

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  • dwells On Sunday, July 8, 2018, dwells (5789)By person wrote:

    A whimsical grotesquerie of a geographic fantasy that comes with no travel brochure, I'm sure. The bugs gave this that extra creepy flavor for certain DL. Also, the cryptic feeling imbued by your opening, left the helpless reader with a sense of falling Cheers and hoping the round trip ticket was a bargain! - Dan

  • Jonas Robinson On Tuesday, July 3, 2018, Jonas Robinson (398)By person wrote:

    Twisted. I like the idea of falling in love in reality however hallucinating simultaneously.

  • Bornfrompain On Tuesday, July 3, 2018, Bornfrompain (827)By person wrote:

    Wow! - BFP

  • Cattarax On Tuesday, July 3, 2018, Cattarax (187)By person wrote:

    A creative mind tripping in a shroom can be dangerous allowing someone to watch you possibly self destruct is s special kinda love ~*Cat*~

  • Just Dave On Tuesday, July 3, 2018, Just Dave (533)By person wrote:

    holding parasols for roaches crossing through the acidic rains; Love it. Great write. JD

  • Alchemist On Tuesday, July 3, 2018, Alchemist (880)By person wrote:

    That sounds like a hell of a place to fall in love.


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