A song of wind and dance

By Jonas Robinson

Fluids seeming like the wind
Withing a dream of bleeding truth
Fluids fleeting from the grave
Amongst the stars of restless rave

Nightmares causing ghostly stones
Broken under drama lava
In the night of kava kava
Waking from the grave in bones

"The red snow is not for play, sweet heart
Go inside and don't tell anyone what you saw"

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Copyright 2018 Jonas Robinson
Published on Monday, June 11, 2018.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, January 26, 2019, carlosjackal (3012)By person wrote:

    An insane dance of grave love wordplay.

  • Jonas Robinson On Tuesday, January 29, 2019, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    That's what I was going for. Thank you for your interesting interpretation. :)

  • Divine hell On Sunday, December 16, 2018, Divine hell (249)By person wrote:

    Reminds me of when I visit the graveyard. Well written

  • Jonas Robinson On Tuesday, December 18, 2018, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    Interesting interpretation. Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: Dude u is proper not right in the head.com init!? 😂 Love it, from one weirdo to the next, bravo 👏

  • Jonas Robinson On Thursday, July 12, 2018, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • Jonas Robinson On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    I'm glad you relate.

  • dwells On Thursday, June 14, 2018, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Got a crazy woodchipper vibe from this one JR; must have been the closing. Cheers! - Dan

  • Jonas Robinson On Thursday, June 21, 2018, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • Jonas Robinson On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    I'm thankful for your feedback. :)

  • Devil lyn On Tuesday, June 12, 2018, Devil lyn (368)By person wrote:

    I enjoy when I come across poems that throw my head for a spin, and this one does just that as it leaves much to the imagination. I see darkness kissed by a bit of violence; secrets buried and unearthed by a conscious for curiosities sake (JMO). Excellent ink! ... ~Devlin

  • Jonas Robinson On Thursday, June 21, 2018, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • Jonas Robinson On Wednesday, February 27, 2019, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    Your interpretation is worth my pride. :)

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