Tell Me

By midnights voice

Tell Me



Tell me anybody !

Do you think you're
just one stop from Eternity ?

Now tell me anybody !

Do you, oh do you . . .
Do you believeeee . . .
In Eternity ?

Well I got that itch
. . . got that itch . . .
and it's sure enough
bothering me


Well I got all of them questions
sure 'nuff
troubling me

Like how many chances
Yes ! How many chances
are God given to you and me

All I want , yes yes . . .
all I want . . .
all I want . . .
a little taste
of eternity


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Copyright 2018 midnights voice
Published on Thursday, June 7, 2018.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Kaleidoscope_Heart On Monday, September 16, 2019, Kaleidoscope_Heart (120)By person wrote:

    Eternity can be a a very peaceful feeling, or it be very cryptic. It can feel mysterious and it can feel so real and understood. Amazing how our understanding and feeling of it transforms

  • DeonLaree On Saturday, April 13, 2019, DeonLaree (17)By person wrote:

    This is something I like of very often!! What is eternity? And Is it something I really want? Yet I dont want to disappear into nothingness

  • Jonas Robinson On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson (947)By person wrote:

    I like the redneck rhetoric in this. It comes as synchronicity, I've been thinking a lot about eternity myself lately. :)

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, December 26, 2018, PoetessDarkly (1019)By person wrote:

    gorgeously composed masterpiece

  • I IS ME On Thursday, June 7, 2018, I IS ME (379)By person wrote:

    There is so many questions needing to be answered.What if death is just a continual replay of a sick life. Great piece.

  • midnights voice On Thursday, June 7, 2018, midnights voice (1047)By person wrote:

    Thank you I Is Me for reading and questioning .

  • Arwen On Thursday, June 7, 2018, Arwen (191)By person wrote:

    Great poem because it is thought provoking!

  • midnights voice On Thursday, June 7, 2018, midnights voice (1047)By person wrote:

    Thank you Wednesday for reading .

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