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Come Black Night
By midnights voice
Come black night
I envy thy heart
I dwells upon the indecisions
You lash out in the dark
Thy cold comfort
The age in my bones
Your sly wink
I won't be here long
All is so futile
Flowers for grave
I see Eleanor Rigby
No one was saved
All of those lonely people
just words to the song
Two rights together
Don't make up a wrong
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Copyright 2018 midnights voice
Published on Monday, May 7, 2018.
Filed under:
"Graphic Art"
Comments on "Come Black Night"
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On Thursday, May 10, 2018, Drea
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wrote:
This left me in a cold place. You always choose the perfect picture to accompany your words.
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On Thursday, May 10, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Dreams for reading . I was just reading your new poem and formulating my comment .
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On Monday, May 7, 2018, I IS ME
(406) wrote:
We don't know why we just think electrons. Same place, same time, just bouncing off each other, no cohesiveness.
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On Monday, May 7, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Ha ha , smashing comment I Is Me .
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On Monday, May 7, 2018, Arwen
(187) wrote:
Oh loneliness is such a monster.
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On Monday, May 7, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Wednesday Addams for reading and lonely comment 😄
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A former member wrote:
This has a fatalistic undertone and the picture sums it all up. Good job. (Anne-Lauren)
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On Monday, May 7, 2018, I IS ME
(406) wrote:
That picture along with this poem. We think of electrons constantly bouncing off each other.
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On Monday, May 7, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Wouldn't those electrons smashing into each other be atomic ! Thank you I Is Me for reading and commenting .
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