Was I

By midnights voice

Was I

.
.
.Tears are the toils
. . . . .I've taken
.The splinter in your eye
. . . . . The rock
. That your foot
. . . . . Stumbles upon


. I was the
. . . . . Albatross around
. The neck
. . . . . of your dreams
. of oblibvion


. Was I the
. . . . . Ravager
. Of the pure
. . . . . The innocent
. The apple
. . . . . of desire


. . . . . Was I

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Copyright 2018 midnights voice
Published on Monday, March 12, 2018.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • SolApathy On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, SolApathy (477)By person wrote:

    The imagery is spectacular...THe pauses give you a moment to absorb the full impact of each stanza. Great work!

  • midnights voice On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, midnights voice (1279)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much SolApathy for your glowing comment .

  • Wednesday Addams On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, Wednesday Addams (312)By person wrote:

    So many fascinating images.

  • midnights voice On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, midnights voice (1279)By person wrote:

    Thank you Wednesday for reading and commenting .

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