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Was I
By midnights voice
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.Tears are the toils
. . . . .I've taken
.The splinter in your eye
. . . . . The rock
. That your foot
. . . . . Stumbles upon
. I was the
. . . . . Albatross around
. The neck
. . . . . of your dreams
. of oblibvion
. Was I the
. . . . . Ravager
. Of the pure
. . . . . The innocent
. The apple
. . . . . of desire
. . . . . Was I
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Copyright 2018 midnights voice
Published on Monday, March 12, 2018.
Filed under:
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, SolApathy
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wrote:
The imagery is spectacular...THe pauses give you a moment to absorb the full impact of each stanza. Great work!
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you so much SolApathy for your glowing comment .
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, Arwen
(187) wrote:
So many fascinating images.
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Wednesday for reading and commenting .
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
awesome ink sir! I adore your pen
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you PoetessDarkey for taking the time to read .
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
My name is Lisa.
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On Tuesday, March 13, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Hello Lisa !
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