Untitled Wave

By Candy Cain

You really aren't good at this.

You really aren't good at,

You really aren't good.

You really aren't.

You, really.


You're off.

You're awful too.

You're awful to me.

You're awful to me now.

You're awful to me, now stop.

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Published on Wednesday, February 7, 2018.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Please ignore. Just testing something. Might delete it. Kinda sorta based on something ghettozombie put up before. I'll be posting my last piece in a few days.
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  • Bornfrompain On Monday, February 12, 2018, Bornfrompain (791)By person wrote:

    Awfully good this was! - BFP

  • Dilated View On Wednesday, February 7, 2018, Dilated View (523)By person wrote:

    The symmetry of this was pretty cool. That can be tough to pull off so nice job :)

  • CosmicFrailty On Wednesday, February 7, 2018, CosmicFrailty (195)By person wrote:

    I like it though. It's very clever and I love how you tear it down to build back onto it in a different way. I enjoyed this.

  • midnights voice On Wednesday, February 7, 2018, midnights voice (1071)By person wrote:

    Interesting .

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