vague description

By molock

we were all left feeling
very disturbed,
when we saw that
terriffying thing,
...that none of us 
heard.

what was it in the
sticky wet dirt?
we stood there
staring,
...but no one said
a word....

it's shapless form,
...was hard to define.
it's absurd nature,
...blinded the minds 
eye...
what it was, 
is
...hard to describe.


when we left,
we all knew.
we could never
speak of it again...

until death,
we have to live with
this
...vague description...

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Copyright 2018 molock
Published on Sunday, January 21, 2018.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Phalanx On Tuesday, January 23, 2018, Phalanx (677)By person wrote:

    Watching somebody die, is never easy. Let somebody know so their parents have some peace.

  • dwells On Monday, January 22, 2018, dwells (4289)By person wrote:

    That which has no name; from the primordial ooze. Yet still remembered by the lizard brain, when the world was young. Oh yeah baby - cheers Mo! - Dan

  • molock On Monday, January 22, 2018, molock (314)By person wrote:

    fantastic comment dwells, you always manage to put a smile on my face ...thank you! Cheers my brother - m0

  • Cassette On Monday, January 22, 2018, Cassette (1144)By person wrote:

    Reminded me of attending a funeral....

  • molock On Monday, January 22, 2018, molock (314)By person wrote:

    thanks for commenting, it's always good hearing from you Cassette. peace - m0

  • Drea On Monday, January 22, 2018, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    This was fun. The imagination runs wild with this.

  • molock On Monday, January 22, 2018, molock (314)By person wrote:

    thanks Drea i'm glad you liked it. one day i decided to write something and try to be vague as possible while i was doing it and this is what i came up with. i had some fun with it. it's always good hearing from you Drea. later- m0


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